First, put 2 cups flour, some milk and a beaten egg into the bowl.
Then, use a spoon to stir it for about 5 minutes until there is no lumps you can see.
After that, use ladle to pour mixture into the frying pan slowly.
Next, cook the pancake for 1 minute then toss it.
Finally, add a little bit of jam on and eat the pancake. How Yummy![/color]
I have read a fantastic book that I would like to recommand to all the girls. Why do I say it is fantastic and just for girls?
First and most important, the story is perfect. It is about a little unicorn lost in the terrible enchanted forest and how Maddie, Sabastain and the other friends helped to find unicorn's parents and the herd.
Second, the book is written by a famous author Carol Barton who always likes to write stories about girls.
Third, the illustration is very attractive and so girlish. The pages are filled with pinky sparkling pictures. EVERYTHING IS PINK. The unicorn is so cute that made you feel want to have a ride on it.
At last, no matter what kind of girls you are, you may find a character in the book is like you, brave girls, clever girls or beautiful girls...
It is a wonderful book and worth reading，isn't it? IT IS UNICORN WISHES!
作者：我女儿 年龄：三年级
If you try to persuade readers, you need to arrange your reasons in order of their importance. The writer (my daughter）chose to begin with the most persuasive point: the story is perfect. and she ends with the least important point: you may find a character in the book is like you.
Another effective way of using the importance is to save the most persuasive for last.
The beach holiday has changed. In the past, travelling is very expensive so only very wealthy family can afford to go to have a beach holiday. Nowadays, we can easily travel by areoplanes. It won't take too long to go to the beach and it won't be that expensive. Wearing long sleeve clothes to cover your skin used to be a regular dressing for women and men in olden days even when you were on the beach. People were embarrassing to see other's skin because of the religion. But now we wear swimming suit made of light fabric, it is quite ok to wear as less as you can.
Like beach holiday of the past, some beach games are still remaining. Digging sand and making sandcastle is a non- stopping fun game for every single kid in both olden days and nowadays.
There is ought to have five steps led to good writing
Step one: Prewriting
Focus on the topic, spend time thinking, identify readers or audience and make a story plan that the piece of ...
Supermarket is always busy.
People are shouting.
Trolley are crashing.
Baby is crying.
Children are running and laughing.
Mummy is blaming.
Tilts are beeping.
Music is on......
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看不懂. 
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看不懂，太难了。你女儿的词汇量好大！. 
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